I had a couple comments from the writer’s group about my character, Teaka, from my flash fiction entry: Evolution. I had confused some readers by not providing a clear enough description. I thought I’d share the crudely executed character sketch I cobbled together. I am not much of an artist but it gives a general idea. Think.. sentient song bird with arms and hands. She loves to preen with her comb and horde the treasures from her little bags of stolen goods…
Update on 7/1 – Scores are in… 22.56 out of 30 not too shabby for a first competitive try.
I occasionally write – flash, splash, crash, dump- fiction when some weird thought pops into my head and I can’t focus on what I should be writing because it won’t leave me alone.
This is one of those… please, have a read and leave me comments on how to improve the dialog…
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It has been another whirlwind couple weeks. Writing took on a bright shine as my interaction with the Facebook group “Write Around the Block” has fired some sleepy brain cells into creative action. Evolution got fairly good critiques and I was happy the readers didn’t pan it as drivel. Jasmine didn’t make the long-list for the Australian Writers’ Centre, June Flash Fiction contest. I’m ok with the outcome, the talent pool is deep, the skill sets are wide and I am a babe patting wet sand on the shore. I’ll keep working. I like the story.
I am just starting to get things out into the public eye, beyond the eyes that see things here. It was quite the jump for me.
The painting I entered in the art show received little comment. I’m happy in that regard as it was quite challenging for me to let it out there.
All these exercises are me, working to be more me. I am trying to be less in the “closet” when it comes to art and writing. These are my winsome babes, perhaps with faces only I love. Yet, I have pushed them from the nest (my soul jumping with them) in an effort to hone my craft, sharpen my skills and spread my wings. Fly or fall, lessons are learned and applied. I’ll take critique, apply what makes sense and continue.
On another note: Irregular Orbit is making its way through my creative process. It has been 8 months since the seed sprouted. It has resulted in 50K words and its about halfway to complete. I’ve overcome the hurdle of the middle dregs… I found the catalyst to keep my characters moving along toward climax and resolution. Onward, onward…
Greetings, I have been having an amazing time of late. Between travel (two great trips I’ll blog about later) and work and writing and playing Dungeons and Dragons (yeah, that one) I have been having a good run! I’ll be posting some Flash Fiction I’ve been dabbling with in various contests. The first is up in “Fiction and Poetry” tab. Evolution is for a flash exercise, 1500 words, 55 hours, Location must include a boat of any kind and a bag of marbles… See what you think. Evolution
Jasmine is a 500 word flash which had to be set at a party and include the phrase “The air was filled with…” Jasmine
The novel, Irregular Orbit, stalled for a while then sprang back to life, and is a slow haul. It is at 46k words now and is likely to head to 100k before first cuts and a bunch of hard core editing. I plan to have that one professionally edited as I feel like it will be something to publish when its done. One chapter that I pulled out already feels like it may be a second in what may be a trilogy. Lord help me.
I am back to writing more frequently now so I hope to see you here on a regular basis.
Until then… let me know what you think of the flash fiction pieces.